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好词,上下片首二句对偶工整,末句63句式顺畅,脉络清晰,立意也很好,赞
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不错的词,首二句对偶工整,末句63句式顺畅,脉络清晰,立意好,赞。
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词不错,脉络清晰,立意新,对偶工整,末句63句式也顺畅。只有,唯有更好
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语句通顺稍显直白,出山门,太直白。首二句对偶工整,末句63句式顺畅,
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