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小渔村词研九期踏月组第19讲作业: |
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问好学友:小词格律正确,首起偶句亦工,结尾一领三句得法。好一幅秋日胜景,让人忘返,在此尽情挥洒,无拘绊。只有一小遗憾:没写标题!
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问好学友小词格律正确,意境好,感觉特别有气势
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问好同学,小词意境很好,非常棒,学习了
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