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问好词友,词格律用韵正确,意脉通络,夹续夹议兼有描写,语言顺达,化典有痕,情感虽无跌宕,却也一朵小梅静静开放。赞,学习啦!
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问好楚韵19-麋鹿学友!您的卜算子·重逢细雨中词序正确,意脉顺畅,
对偶、断句、用韵无误。加油!
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